Saturday 7 April 2012

Mysterious

Though not an artist just like you,
I always make you an art
Wrap within it are the feelings
Straightly coming from my heart

Though they may look of mysterious kind
Yet can be deciphered with an open mind
Its you who are mysterious
Making me delirious.

Changed the long walks into precious moments
Just as like king Midas
Preserving the gold that you have touched
In my memory jar.
                              -Ravi
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6 comments:

  1. Utsav Gandhi8 April 2012 at 10:26

    Nice one dude! Really liked the lines "Changed the long walks into precious moments" and "Just as like king Midas
    Preserving the gold that you have touched
    In my memory jar"

    And the pic is also very nice! Keep it up!

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  2. Unknown8 April 2012 at 11:10

    Thank youuuuuuuu Utsav.... :)))))))))))

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  3. Nivedita Gajjar8 April 2012 at 12:39

    wow!! loved the lines "wrap ... my heart"and the last two lines of preserving the gold ... memory jar".. .and the pic luks fab! where did u get it from! very well written... like it best out of the prev ones u've written

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  4. Unknown8 April 2012 at 18:47

    Thank You Nivedita... I have no words to express my feelings right now (due to lack of my vocab)...jokes apart...I am overwhelmed with joy on reading your's and Utsav's response to this poem.

    Thank you both for liking the pic (courtesy google images)...

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  5. Aparana Jaiswal11 April 2012 at 21:15

    really nice ravi! its beautiful! :)

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  6. Unknown11 April 2012 at 23:01

    Thank you Aparana.....

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